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Daylight Main Street Sometime Before the July 4th Celebration
Arden Summerfield was in town again this day, he'd been coming into town quite often lately considering he lived on a farmstead a good few miles away to the east. Ever the dutiful son, he was careful to keep up with is daily farm chores but he now had a pressing reason to go to Kalispell lately. The Fourth of July celebrations were closing in and the local paper and town gossip all claimed it would be the best festival yet for the small Montana town. While honestly he did not have much personal experience with such events, this time he was positively eager to attend.
And it all had to do with the upcoming dance too. Another thing he was hardly experienced with either but it wasn't just that. Yet again his annoying, make that maddening, cousin had gotten to him once more. His relative's teasing, jibes, and cocky attitude angered Arden. So it was it ended up in a bet. And one with, at least to this farmboy, important stakes. Loser had to give up his saddle. Now Arden only had the one saddle, course he only had the one horse too and that itself had been a gift from his folks on his latest birthday. He tried not to even think about how upset his folks might be if they discovered he'd gambled away his saddle. It would also mean a lot of bareback riding til he saved up enough money for a second saddle. Adding to that would be the misery of his cousin lording it over him every time they saw each other.
What was the bet one might wonder? Quite simple - Arden had to ask a gal to go to the dance with him and she had to say 'yes'. If that sounded easy enough, it was decidedly not. Well, more than that really, she also had to actually then attend with him and stay the duration too.
Arden was a virtual unknown in town, he'd never even attended the local school as a boy. He didn't spend a lot of time ever in town even. Then there was the young man himself. Perhaps he was being hard on himself but he was hardly the strapping piece of manhood some young men were his age. He was strong enough but most might not think so at first glance.
Then when people did manage a closer up look at the young farmer, that's when his eyes....make that eye...would definitely call attention to itself. One eye was brown but the other was....well, barely even there, all white and milky. Plain for anyone to tell he was blind in that eye too. He'd been teased for it many times too, even by his rotten cousin.
Despite all that and a certain normal enough lack of confidence with the ladies, Arden was absolutely determined to go to this dance. It just remained for him to find the right gal to say 'yes' to him. His first attempts were immediate turndowns, some fancy looking blonde girl who smirked her refusal and kept walking being the latest. Arden was a realist, it was evident he had to lower his standards.
And not a few minutes earlier he found this one gal walking down the boardwalk all by her lonesome, basket in hand. Even from across the street it was apparent she was certainly not pretty....alright more like homely. Now as he drew closer, he noticed the freckles too, good lord, that was a whole passel of freckles. No matter, he had to ask. He figured odds were no other young man in town had approached her. Beggars couldn't be choosers was the old saying.
"Ummm, excuse me, miss?" he announced as soon as he was in easy talking range.
"When it's peach pickin' time in Georgia - it's boy pickin' time for me"
Stephens had finished her shift at the diner and was hurrying back to Mrs Ashby's, her head in the clouds as per usual, when, just as she was near the big house, a strange boy seemed to be right in front of her and she only just buried a shriek.
"Ummm, excuse me, miss?"
"Oh, you frightened the life out of me!!" she panted, holding her hand dramatically to her heart. Like most people, her gaze was instantly drawn to his milky eye: somehow, the fact that he would have been an attractive lad but for that awful blemish made the thing stick out all the more. Her heart went out to him, poor boy. She forced herself to look into his good eye and she then, putting two and two together and getting five, grabbed him by the arm and blurted "Come on, it's not too late, I'm sure that Mrs Ashby will see you and that she will like you very much!"
She knew Mrs Ashby was interviewing candidates for the position of Footman today (whatever a footman was, exactly! Darned if she knew!) and made the assumption that he was about ask her if he had the right address or some such enquiry.
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Unfortunately his attempt to stop her for a quick bit of conversation quite startled the poor thing.
"Oh, you frightened the life out of me!!" she panted, holding her hand dramatically to her heart.
"Oh, I'm sorry," not a great start for this Arden thought.
Then she suddenly grabbed him by the arm and blurted "Come on, it's not too late, I'm sure that Mrs Ashby will see you and that she will like you very much!"
Wait! What was she doing? He was plainly startled by the move.
"Excuse me, miss, I don't even know who Mrs. Ashby is. There is some kind of mistake here," he didn't want to pull away, that would be rude.
"I was hoping to simply have a quick word with you actually," the young man clarified his wish.
"When it's peach pickin' time in Georgia - it's boy pickin' time for me"
"Excuse me, miss, I don't even know who Mrs. Ashby is. There is some kind of mistake here," he didn't want to pull away, that would be rude.
"Oh, you're not after the job?!" Well, what the heck did this person want? Not panhandling her for money, was he, because that was something she definitely did not possess.
"I was hoping to simply have a quick word with you actually," the young man clarified his wish.
"Oh well... er sure, but I need to keep walking... I mustn't be late for work!" Stephens warned, actually picking up her pace a little, her heart beating a little in unease. She didn't know who this person was, but that weird eye was giving her the creeps and she wanted to get to the house and help before he turned nasty and attacked her or something.
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"Oh, you're not after the job?!" now the little redhead joined him in his confusion.
"No, miss," Arden shook his head,
"I was hoping to simply have a quick word with you actually."
She wanted to keep moving, "Oh well... er sure, but I need to keep walking... I mustn't be late for work!"
"My pardon, I won't take long if you just let me explain...........as we go," he easily kept pace with her as his legs were longer than hers.
"I will come out with it then. I trust you are aware of the 4th of July celebrations, including the big dance? I would like to ask you out ...you know, go to the dance with me?" there he threw it out there.
Already given her haste and her seeming mix of annoyance and discomfort, he full expected she would give him the mitten.
"When it's peach pickin' time in Georgia - it's boy pickin' time for me"
"I will come out with it then. I trust you are aware of the 4th of July celebrations, including the big dance? I would like to ask you out ...you know, go to the dance with me?" there he threw it out there.
"Oh!" Actually, it sounded more like "Ugh!"
"I'm afraid I'm not going to the dance!" she said hurriedly, not looking at him. Ew, that eye! It gave her the creeps. "I'm busy that night! My mistress needs me to do things!" she blurted as they reached the side door of the rather grand house (well, grand for Kalispell, that is) and the door opened and a black haired girl poked her head out.
"Oh good, you're back! Who's he?!" the black hair asked.
"Oh, he's no-one. Asked me to the dance but I'm not going!!" ginger answered quickly and darted in and away.
The other girl looked Arden over appraisingly and with an oddly shrewd look of understanding.
"Gave you the mitten, huh?!" she said to the unsuccessful lad.
"Say, come in. Let me fix you a cup of coffee and a cookie and we'll discuss your future, son"
It was an odd sort of offer from a complete stranger, but then Herschelina Colquitt was an odd sort of girl, who tended to put even Quentin Cantrell to shame when it came to shooting from the hip.
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As Arden suspected, the young miss was spooked alright. He could figure out why too. It might be partially his sudden approach of her like that out on the street but more likely the biggest reason was his looks, specifically his eye. Like he could help that.
"I'm afraid I'm not going to the dance!" she said hurriedly, not looking at him. "I'm busy that night! My mistress needs me to do things!" she blurted as they reached a side door of some house, he'd never been in this part of town before really.
The door opened and there was a dark haired girl.
"Oh good, you're back! Who's he?!" the black hair asked.
Arden did not get a chance to answer though, the two gals talked as if he wasn't even present.
"Oh, he's no-one. Asked me to the dance but I'm not going!!" ginger answered quickly and darted in and away.
The young man blinked, there she goes. So much for her then.
The other girl looked him over up and down as if studying him. Arden was quite ready to walk away then but before he could even turn...
"Gave you the mitten, huh?!" she said.
"Yes, I'm used to it though," Arden shrugged.
"Say, come in. Let me fix you a cup of coffee and a cookie and we'll discuss your future, son"
Alright, he did not see that coming? And 'son'? Really?
He would have simply thanked her for the offer and left but a part of him wondered if he should ask this one? He didn't know her anymore than he had known the redhead but she was a damn sight friendlier than the other.
"I suppose I could, for a few minutes anyhow," he answered softly but did not step inside quite yet. He had a question first.
"What about my future?" Seemed like a fair enough question.
"That's too much sugar for a dime!"
"I suppose I could, for a few minutes anyhow," he answered softly but did not step inside quite yet.
"You can spare me a few minutes? How gracious of you!" the girl replied sarcastically, although it was an amused sort of sarcasm.
He had a question first. "What about my future?" Seemed like a fair enough question.
"You are changing it this very second, stranger!" the girl with the piercing blue eyes replied promptly. "Now come in or go... it isn't proper for me to stand gossiping with strange young men on the doorstep." she said and went inside.
Inside, the plump cook, Mrs Lampeter, was having a sit down and didn't even rise when Hersh came back in with the young man who had followed poor old carrots home.
"What the divil is wrong with your sister, Hersh, and and who's this now? Not another one for the footman's job?" the ulsterwoman asked.
Herschelina looked at the lad behind her.
"Take a seat, this is Mrs Lampeter. I'm Herschelina Colquitt and that girl you were bothering is my sister Stephens Colquitt. Yes, I know they're stupid names, don't bother to say so. Sit there." she was a bossy one, to be sure. She turned to the rotund cook.
"He asked Steve to the barn dance, no wonder she's gone into hiding"
"Oh... how romantic!!" gushed Mrs L.
Herschelina didn't look so convinced. She put a cup of coffee and a plate with a couple of cookies in front of Arden.
"Tell us your name and why you asked my sister to the dance, and I want the truth! Was it just to make fun of her?" the girl demanded as if she were a union officer interrogating a confederate spy during the war, rather than a chit of a girl talking to a strapping farm lad who could take her across his knee if the fancy took him.
Mrs Lampeter looked at Arden sympathetically.
"Best tell her the truth, son, she has the sight, does our Herschelina, she'll get to the truth of the thing soon enough anyway..." she cooed, reaching over and patting his hand in a motherly way.
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She was sarcastic, this one. And no need for it, he was only being polite and not wishing to be a bother to any of them. Arden had one basic question for her. Her answer was in the form of a promise but with no real details. Annoying. But he stepped inside. There was another older woman sitting there who looked surprised.
"What the divil is wrong with your sister, Hersh, and and who's this now? Not another one for the footman's job?" the ulsterwoman asked.
Herschelina looked at the lad behind her.
"Take a seat, this is Mrs Lampeter. I'm Herschelina Colquitt and that girl you were bothering is my sister Stephens Colquitt. Yes, I know they're stupid names, don't bother to say so. Sit there."
Well, at least he got names now, as for her brusque order, he was not inclined to meekly obey.
"I will stand thank you, don't plan on being here very long," Arden declared softly but firmly.
"He asked Steve to the barn dance, no wonder she's gone into hiding"
Arden winced.
"Oh... how romantic!!" gushed Mrs L.
Herschelina didn't look so convinced. She put a cup of coffee and a plate with a couple of cookies in front of Arden.
"Kind of you but no thank you," she informed her calmly.
"Tell us your name and why you asked my sister to the dance, and I want the truth! Was it just to make fun of her?" the girl demanded.
He frowned.
The other woman urged him to cooperate.
"I will not make fun of her. Me, of all people, would make fun of someone? Hardly, miss," he defended himself.
"I really want to go to this big dance coming up. Never been to the like. So I have been asking various young ladies in town, you see I don't live in Kalispell but on a farmstead ..........oh beg your pardon..."
"My name is Arden Summerfield, nice to meet you both," he also removed his hat too, having forgotten that in all this confusion.
"That's too much sugar for a dime!"
"I will not make fun of her. Me, of all people, would make fun of someone? Hardly, miss," he defended himself.
"Oh Herschelina!" admonished the cook mildly, taking to the lad. But the pugnacious girl waited with her arms crossed.
"I really want to go to this big dance coming up. Never been to the like. So I have been asking various young ladies in town, you see I don't live in Kalispell but on a farmstead ..........oh beg your pardon..."
"You being...?" the dark haired girl did not let up.
"My name is Arden Summerfield, nice to meet you both," he also removed his hat too, having forgotten that in all this confusion.
The girl nodded.
"I know, Summerfield place. Our place is more up the valley." Hersh said more to herself than the other two, as if thinking.
"I'll go with you to the dance... if you like. But I reserve the right to make you presentable. Have you ever worn an eye patch? And do you have a Sunday suit?" she asked.
"Oh Herschelina!!" gasped Mrs Lampeter, she was shocked on two fronts: number one due to the girl's, well, rudeness, 'presentable' indeed! But she should be used to that by now with the child. but secondly, because she knew that she had been asked to the dance by a few boys, all of them decidedly better catches than this poor blighted lad.